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When my novel came out, I told everyone that I was most emphatically a long-form writer -- I wrote long articles for newspapers and magazines and I had never written a short story I liked. Then I had a baby, and suddenly I found myself thinking of short stories I wanted to write -- multitudes of them. I think it was partly because I was living the life of a parent, in which it's difficult to complete a thought, much less a long narrative. But beyond the practical impediments, there was also the fact that parenthood was such a profoundly new experience that I felt compelled to make sense of it in the only way I know -- by telling stories. So my short story collection, A Detour on the Way to the World, is about the relationship between caretakers and their charges, particularly parents and children. In my life as a writer, I have written poetry, a novel, magazine articles, and picture books, and I find short stories to be the single most difficult genre I have ever attempted. There's just no room for error. It's like building a bridge out of toothpicks -- one false move and the whole thing collapses. I was immensely grateful to the National Endowment for the Arts for giving me a fiction-writing grant that allowed me to spend a lot of time failing -- writing pages and pages that I deleted at the end of the day, or simply writing the same sentence over and over again. There was one story that I wrote five times from top to bottom before I finally hit upon a way to tell it. When I got the grant, I imagined myself gliding along through the manuscript like a canoe in a current, but instead I did a lot of paddling, and even more portaging. My moment of inspiration, if there was one, was that it didn't matter whether the writing came easily or not -- at the end of the year, I couldn't tell the difference between the pages that came in a flood of inspiration and the ones that were laboriously constructed over weeks and weeks. Probably the most rewarding part has been learning how to write lean, how to work within the confines of the short story. I feel like I've been doing wind sprints for a year -- like my writing got more trim and muscular. And I've loved getting those stories that were buzzing around my head down on paper so I could think about something else. In everything I write, I tend to write long and then cut like crazy, and that will probably continue. But short stories have taught me a useful kind of impatience, which I hope will save me from having to cut as brutally as I did with my last novel, which I had to cut by about 350 pages. I have a couple more rounds of revisions to do, and one more story to write. Then of course there's the selling process, which I try not to think about, as my agent has informed me several times that I couldn't have picked a less marketable genre. One is supposed to write a short story collection first, using all the pieces one wrote in graduate school, and then write a novel. Instead I skipped graduate school, wrote a novel, and followed it up with a short story collection. But I love reading short stories, so if I can just find a few million other people who do as well, my success is virtually assured. LinksArticles by Slater in Mother Jones, SF Gate, Legal Affairs, Sierra Magazine, (2), (3). See more What Are You Working On? interviews. |
published 21 Mar 06 on Too Beautiful. email copyright 2006 Mark Pritchard, Bernal Heights, San Francisco |